Thursday, September 30, 2010
Please Comment
Please comment on my story that I am writing. You can comment as annonymous even. Please comment though.
Monday, September 27, 2010
Chapter 4
When Kyla and Kira’s parents placed what used to be their chokers on their heads they realized the chokers were now tiaras. Then the girls felt their shoulder blades growing. Only it was not their shoulder blades. It was WINGS!!
That was all a year ago. Kyla and Kira have lived with the Sunpixis since.
One day when Kyla was in the meadow, a strange dark mist hung over a hill. It seemed to be killing the plants and it was spreading.She ran back to her father and showed him the mist. Afterwards Kyla overheard her parents talking.
“What are we going to do?” asked the Queen.
“I don’t know what we are going to do, but I do know one thing,” the King said, “The Darknesse is upon us!”
Kyla gasped and ran up to her bedroom that she shared with Kira and told her what she just heard.
“What is the Darknesse?” Kira asked.
“I don’t know but I don't think it is a good thing.”
“What can we do?” Kira asked.
“We have to stop it.”
That was all a year ago. Kyla and Kira have lived with the Sunpixis since.
One day when Kyla was in the meadow, a strange dark mist hung over a hill. It seemed to be killing the plants and it was spreading.She ran back to her father and showed him the mist. Afterwards Kyla overheard her parents talking.
“What are we going to do?” asked the Queen.
“I don’t know what we are going to do, but I do know one thing,” the King said, “The Darknesse is upon us!”
Kyla gasped and ran up to her bedroom that she shared with Kira and told her what she just heard.
“What is the Darknesse?” Kira asked.
“I don’t know but I don't think it is a good thing.”
“What can we do?” Kira asked.
“We have to stop it.”
Sunday, September 26, 2010
Harry Potter Wand
Hi! I got a Harry Potter Wand from when my dad went to Universal Studios. This is from Harry Potter Land! This is Harry's wand. Molly got Hermiones's wand. 
Saturday, September 25, 2010
Comment Please
Please Comment and tell me what you don't and do like about my story to make it better. I won't feel bad. Just comment. You can even comment as annonymous if you want. I will also take Ideas for upcoming chapters.
Friday, September 24, 2010
Chapter 3
When they go through the door they enter a magical world. They are in a meadow and there is a little girl, with long golden hair, picking what Kyla thinks is strawberries.
“Hi, what’s your name?” Kyla asks the little girl.
The girl looked up and with a surprised look on her face, she ran down the meadow. Both the girls run after. Soon they come across a beautiful golden castle.
“Wow,” Kira says, “Everything here is so........ golden.”
“I know.” Kyla said in response.
Just then, a person came out of the castle. She gasped and ran back in. A few moments later, she came back out with thousands of people. They all looked like normal humans except they had glimmery wings on their backs.
“Welcome to the land of the Sunpixis.” Said a tall man.
Eventually when Kyla found her voice, she said “Did you say Sun-PIXIES? You don’t look like pixies to me.”
The man laughed. “Not pixies! We are Sunpixis. Long ago the ones before us came from the sun. The sun is our power source. If the sun dies, we die.”
He and a tall women stepped forward. “You are not human. I am your father and this is your mother. You are our daughters. Princesses of the Sunpixis.
Kyla and Kira stared at them in disbelief.
“Welcome Home.” Their Parents said, “Welcome Home.”
“Hi, what’s your name?” Kyla asks the little girl.
The girl looked up and with a surprised look on her face, she ran down the meadow. Both the girls run after. Soon they come across a beautiful golden castle.
“Wow,” Kira says, “Everything here is so........ golden.”
“I know.” Kyla said in response.
Just then, a person came out of the castle. She gasped and ran back in. A few moments later, she came back out with thousands of people. They all looked like normal humans except they had glimmery wings on their backs.
“Welcome to the land of the Sunpixis.” Said a tall man.
Eventually when Kyla found her voice, she said “Did you say Sun-PIXIES? You don’t look like pixies to me.”
The man laughed. “Not pixies! We are Sunpixis. Long ago the ones before us came from the sun. The sun is our power source. If the sun dies, we die.”
He and a tall women stepped forward. “You are not human. I am your father and this is your mother. You are our daughters. Princesses of the Sunpixis.
Kyla and Kira stared at them in disbelief.
“Welcome Home.” Their Parents said, “Welcome Home.”
Thursday, September 23, 2010
Story
Why I am writing the story is because I am entering it in a writing competition. Here is the link to see other people's storys who won in the past: http://www.rmpbs.org/ There is one from last year that got recorded.
The Title
The Title of my story is going to be.......................Drum Roll Please.......................................................
The Doorway to the Sunpixis
(You will find out what those are in Chapter Three)
Thursday, September 16, 2010
Chapter two
“Wow...” Kira said, “I never thought I had a twin.”
“Me neither.”
“Oh-my-gosh!!! This is so cool!”
They both say at the exact same time.Since they both lived in the same neighborhood (only at different sides) and it was Friday, they decided to go to Kyla’s secret hideout in the woods.
The next day the went to the hideout. Kyla showed Kira her choker.
“I had one like that. One day when I came here, in the woods, I came across a little girl she was hurt. She told me to give her my necklace as if it would heal her or something. The next day she was gone. The choker had connected and it wouldn’t fit over my head.”
“Wierd. Can you show me the spot where you found her?”
“Sure.”
About five minutes later, they were at the spot where Kira found the girl.
“Here is my ‘necklace’.”
Then all of a sudden Kyla’s necklace started glowing. It unhooked itself and started floating on the air. It started growing and it too, like Kira’s, connected then fell to the ground.
The trees started moving and then, a doorway appeared!
“Let’s go inside!” Kyla said excitedly.
“I don’t know, I mean this doorway just appeared. Isn’t that a little weird?”
“No-well yeah, But I want to explore it! Please Kira! Will you come with me?”
“Fine.”
Then they enter the door.
“Me neither.”
“Oh-my-gosh!!! This is so cool!”
They both say at the exact same time.Since they both lived in the same neighborhood (only at different sides) and it was Friday, they decided to go to Kyla’s secret hideout in the woods.
The next day the went to the hideout. Kyla showed Kira her choker.
“I had one like that. One day when I came here, in the woods, I came across a little girl she was hurt. She told me to give her my necklace as if it would heal her or something. The next day she was gone. The choker had connected and it wouldn’t fit over my head.”
“Wierd. Can you show me the spot where you found her?”
“Sure.”
About five minutes later, they were at the spot where Kira found the girl.
“Here is my ‘necklace’.”
Then all of a sudden Kyla’s necklace started glowing. It unhooked itself and started floating on the air. It started growing and it too, like Kira’s, connected then fell to the ground.
The trees started moving and then, a doorway appeared!
“Let’s go inside!” Kyla said excitedly.
“I don’t know, I mean this doorway just appeared. Isn’t that a little weird?”
“No-well yeah, But I want to explore it! Please Kira! Will you come with me?”
“Fine.”
Then they enter the door.
Monday, September 13, 2010
Help Me Name My Story
Please help me name my story. If you come up with a good name fot it please comment and tell me your idea. You might come up with more ideas after I post more story.
Mary
Mary
Chapter one
“Kyla! We’re going to be late! Remember it’s your first day of 5th grade!”
“Just a minute!” Kyla said, she clipped her gold choker around her neck. She never knew why but she always wore it. When she walked downstairs Her mother had breakfast set for her.
“If you hurry I will drive you to school early.”
“Ok.”
When they got to school Kyla went into her classroom. The teacher was there along with a few other kids.
“Pick your seat. You can sit anywhere you like.”said the teacher.Kyla looked around. The tables were in groups of four. One table group was already full of boys. Another one had only one girl at it. Kyla decided to sit there.
“Hi” Kyla said to the girl as she starts writing her name on her name tag, “What’s your name?"
The girl dosen’t look up but replies “Kira, what’s yours?”
“Kyla.”Then they look up.
“WOAH” They say at the exact same time.
Kira goes up to the teacher and asks ”Can I go to the Bathroom?”
“Sure”Kira leaves. Now Kyla goes up to the teacher and asks the same question.
“Sure-wait-didn’t I just say you could?’
“Oh yeah.” Kyla says in return When Kyla goes into the bathroom Kira is studying herself in the mirror. Kyla goes over and looks at their reflections. They were exactly the same!
“When is your birthday?” Kira asks.
“I don’t know. I was adopted--or well left on my mother’s doorstep. I was 3 months at the time so I am turning 11 in October.”
“Me too!!!” said Kira.
“I was adopted in January.” Kyla said.
“Me TOO!!!” said Kira practically shouting!
“This can only mean one thing.” Kyla said, “We’re TWINS!!!!”
“Just a minute!” Kyla said, she clipped her gold choker around her neck. She never knew why but she always wore it. When she walked downstairs Her mother had breakfast set for her.
“If you hurry I will drive you to school early.”
“Ok.”
When they got to school Kyla went into her classroom. The teacher was there along with a few other kids.
“Pick your seat. You can sit anywhere you like.”said the teacher.Kyla looked around. The tables were in groups of four. One table group was already full of boys. Another one had only one girl at it. Kyla decided to sit there.
“Hi” Kyla said to the girl as she starts writing her name on her name tag, “What’s your name?"
The girl dosen’t look up but replies “Kira, what’s yours?”
“Kyla.”Then they look up.
“WOAH” They say at the exact same time.
Kira goes up to the teacher and asks ”Can I go to the Bathroom?”
“Sure”Kira leaves. Now Kyla goes up to the teacher and asks the same question.
“Sure-wait-didn’t I just say you could?’
“Oh yeah.” Kyla says in return When Kyla goes into the bathroom Kira is studying herself in the mirror. Kyla goes over and looks at their reflections. They were exactly the same!
“When is your birthday?” Kira asks.
“I don’t know. I was adopted--or well left on my mother’s doorstep. I was 3 months at the time so I am turning 11 in October.”
“Me too!!!” said Kira.
“I was adopted in January.” Kyla said.
“Me TOO!!!” said Kira practically shouting!
“This can only mean one thing.” Kyla said, “We’re TWINS!!!!”
Hi!
I am Mary, this is my blog. I will post things about my life and I will also post pictures and videos. If you go to my other pages, The Adorables and The Funnies, I have funny and cute pictures. On this page, I will have normal posts.
♦Mary♦
♦Mary♦
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)